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For the century, we had believed the theory for the Earth as the centre of the cosmos, whilst it was not only false but also disprovable after all. however, now, there is nobody claims the Earth is centre of every body in the sky is phenomena confirmed, means acceptance for the Earth"s physical place is a little point in the universe is already common sense, though the mental position of the planet is still centrum maximum(centre maximum) caused some of our values is based and pointed terra pro centrum maximum. therefore it mentions centrum multiplicativum(centres at so many places) because extraterrestrial values to require thinking so is that also needed belief and hoping no life on other bodies occurred for them who are special.
Whatever we hoping, the true is not for us. the discovery of 51 pegasi b also known as "Bellerophone", meanwhile it is just a hell like HD 209458 b also known as "Osiris". anyway, scientists found a better place but not habitable in the constellation "Horologium", the planet"s name is Iota Horologii b with mean global temperature without greenhouse effect about 330 kelvin makes its moon"s climate extreme and keeps humid and warm. Sudarsky classified the planet as Water Cloud Jovian, and Whatmough classified the planet as Sulphurous Cloud Jovian instead of Water Cloud. either of them are not habitable for the life we know. though a planet was found in the constellation "Eridanus" and its name is HD 28185 b, which highly habitable, lowly orbital eccentricity, exposition to insolation so much as that the Earth would be. even if it is a Jovian planet like Jupiter without any kind of solid surface, the living things like Grate Kite, Île-Grands-en-Ciel(grate island in sky), Green Ballon, and Große Flugzeug(big aeroplane). moreover the planet can have rocky moon, and it more massive than Jupiter, its moon may be as large as the Earth, promises the harbouring life, and goes too far to form the civilisation.
furthermore, scientists were able to find a interesting planet in the constellation "Cygnus", and that is a member of a binary system. partner of 16 Cygni A, 16 Cygni B, is the owner. 16 Cygni Bb also known as "Yo-Yo", since National Geographic called the object so. the planet, "Yo-Yo" might have moon like our Earth during spring or autumn. During spring, it is a Water Cloud Jovian, means its global temp is habitable. but beginning of the summer it changes its form to Sulphurous Cloud Jovian or Cloudy Gaseous Jovian which are confusable with a ocean planet. the mean temp of its moon is almost 350 kelvin. but planet won"t get so high over 360 kelvin because not equal insolation is for every range of latitude, therefore heated water vapour keeps going to the poles, where cooler than the equator, then the vapour forms a large cloud, and falls down as rain, and mean temperature falls down to 325 kelvin. however, after, in peak of the summer, the planet itself is in form of Clarified Jovian. the autumn is begining, it changes its form to Sulphurous Cloud Jovian or Cloudy Gaseous Jovian, finally to Ammonium Hydrosulphide Cloud Jovian through Water Cloud Jovian at the beginning of the winter. this is because of its owner"s companion star 16 Cygni A, makes its orbit nearly circular and highly eccentric as oscillation.
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For the century, we had believed the theory for the Earth as the centre of the cosmos, whilst it was not only false but also disprovable after all. however, now, there is nobody claims the Earth is centre of every body in the sky is phenomena confirmed, means acceptance for the Earth¥"s physical place is a little point in the universe is already common sense, though the mental position of the planet is still centrum maximum(centre maximum) caused some of our values is based and pointed terra pro centrum maximum. therefore it mentions centrum multiplicativum(centres at so many places) because extraterrestrial values to require thinking so is that also needed belief and hoping no life on other bodies occurred for them who are special.
Whatever we hoping, the true is not for us. the discovery of 51 pegasi b also known as Bellerophone, meanwhile it is just a hell like HD 209458 b also known as Osiris. anyway, scientists found a better place but not habitable in the constellation Horologium, the planet¥"s name is Iota Horologii b with mean global temperature without greenhouse effect about 330 kelvin makes its moon¥"s climate extreme and keeps humid and warm. Sudarsky classified the planet as Water Cloud Jovian, and Whatmough classified the planet as Sulphurous Cloud Jovian instead of Water Cloud. either of them are not habitable for the life we know. though a planet was found in the constellation Eridanus and its name is HD 28185 b, which highly habitable, lowly orbital eccentricity, exposition to insolation so much as that the Earth would be. even if it is a Jovian planet like Jupiter without any kind of solid surface, the living things like Grate Kite, Île-Grands-en-Ciel(grate island in sky), Green Ballon, and Große Flugzeug(big aeroplane). moreover the planet can have rocky moon, and it more massive than Jupiter, its moon may be as large as the Earth, promises the harbouring life, and goes too far to form the civilisation.
furthermore, scientists were able to find a interesting planet in the constellation Cygnus, and that is a member of a binary system. partner of 16 Cygni A, 16 Cygni B, is the owner. 16 Cygni Bb also known as Yo-Yo, since National Geographic called the object so. the planet, Yo-Yo might have moon like our Earth during spring or autumn. During spring, it is a Water Cloud Jovian, means its global temp is habitable. but beginning of the summer it changes its form to Sulphurous Cloud Jovian or Cloudy Gaseous Jovian which are confusable with a ocean planet. the mean temp of its moon is almost 350 kelvin. but planet won¥"t get so high over 360 kelvin because not equal insolation is for every range of latitude, therefore heated water vapour keeps going to the poles, where cooler than the equator, then the vapour forms a large cloud, and falls down as rain, and mean temperature falls down to 325 kelvin. however, after, in peak of the summer, the planet itself is in form of Clarified Jovian. the autumn is begining, it changes its form to Sulphurous Cloud Jovian or Cloudy Gaseous Jovian, finally to Ammonium Hydrosulphide Cloud Jovian through Water Cloud Jovian at the beginning of the winter. this is because of its owner¥"s companion star 16 Cygni A, makes its orbit nearly circular and highly eccentric as oscillation.
厳格な文法校正が必要です
For the century, we had believed the theory for the Earth as the centre of the cosmos, whilst it was not only false but also disprovable after all. however, now, there is nobody claims the Earth is centre of every body in the sky is phenomena confirmed, means acceptance for the Earth¥"s physical place is a little point in the universe is already common sense, though the mental position of the planet is still centrum maximum(centre maximum) caused some of our values is based and pointed terra pro centrum maximum. therefore it mentions centrum multiplicativum(centres at so many places) because extraterrestrial values to require thinking so is that also needed belief and hoping no life on other bodies occurred for them who are special.
Whatever we hoping, the true is not for us. the discovery of 51 pegasi b also known as Bellerophone, meanwhile it is just a hell like HD 209458 b also known as Osiris. anyway, scientists found a better place but not habitable in the constellation Horologium, the planet¥"s name is Iota Horologii b with mean global temperature without greenhouse effect about 330 kelvin makes its moon¥"s climate extreme and keeps humid and warm. Sudarsky classified the planet as Water Cloud Jovian, and Whatmough classified the planet as Sulphurous Cloud Jovian instead of Water Cloud. either of them are not habitable for the life we know. though a planet was found in the constellation Eridanus and its name is HD 28185 b, which highly habitable, lowly orbital eccentricity, exposition to insolation so much as that the Earth would be. even if it is a Jovian planet like Jupiter without any kind of solid surface, the living things like Grate Kite, Île-Grands-en-Ciel(grate island in sky), Green Ballon, and Große Flugzeug(big aeroplane). moreover the planet can have rocky moon, and it more massive than Jupiter, its moon may be as large as the Earth, promises the harbouring life, and goes too far to form the civilisation.
furthermore, scientists were able to find a interesting planet in the constellation Cygnus, and that is a member of a binary system. partner of 16 Cygni A, 16 Cygni B, is the owner. 16 Cygni Bb also known as Yo-Yo, since National Geographic called the object so. the planet, Yo-Yo might have moon like our Earth during spring or autumn. During spring, it is a Water Cloud Jovian, means its global temp is habitable. but beginning of the summer it changes its form to Sulphurous Cloud Jovian or Cloudy Gaseous Jovian which are confusable with a ocean planet. the mean temp of its moon is almost 350 kelvin. but planet won¥"t get so high over 360 kelvin because not equal insolation is for every range of latitude, therefore heated water vapour keeps going to the poles, where cooler than the equator, then the vapour forms a large cloud, and falls down as rain, and mean temperature falls down to 325 kelvin. however, after, in peak of the summer, the planet itself is in form of Clarified Jovian. the autumn is begining, it changes its form to Sulphurous Cloud Jovian or Cloudy Gaseous Jovian, finally to Ammonium Hydrosulphide Cloud Jovian through Water Cloud Jovian at the beginning of the winter. this is because of its owner¥"s companion star 16 Cygni A, makes its orbit nearly circular and highly eccentric as oscillation.
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